My story

This is my narrative Enjoy:)

April The Apricot

April and Pippa the pip, April’s best friend, were off for their usual morning stroll. While they walked, they would pop into each one of the Mushrooms, known as the Mushys, houses to drop the fresh lamingtons April baked every morning for them. Everyone loved April’s lamingtons, the mushys would always compliment her like, “Yum April, these are delicious,”  or  ,”M M M, these lamingtons are award winning”. April was a sweet, young, cute, friendly, caring, bubbly and round little girl, every mushy, especially Master Mush, the carer of all, loved her. She was their true best friend. April did have a dark dark past, which she dares to speak of. But I’ll tell you, when she was 1, April’s parents, Bob and Matilda, were picked off the bush and turned into jam at the Apricot jam factory. When they were picked, April fell off, April’s Father, Bob, yelled,” April RUN!” April ran for Five minutes until she found the forest, where she was taken in by the Mushys and ever since she has been living there.

April feared that she too would be found and turned into jam. This was her greatest fear. But luckily for her, the master mush said ,”I’ll take care of you.”

One day April woke up to a great loud noise. They were searching the forest for apricots. It was Mr Colopesticolotion. Mr Colopesticolotion was a mean, cruel and unfair man, he wanted more + more + more + more +  more +  more + more + more every single day. Master Mush came storming in and said,” Follow me !”so April followed after. Master Mush lead April down a secret passageway. While they walked down, Master Mush suddenly stopped and said ,”I have a plan, keep following  the passageway, I will build a fence and  the other mushys will save all the other apricots, ok?” . “OK”, said April and off they went. Two hours had passed and then the humans were gone so every mushy went and got to work on building the fence. Every mush was in positions building a fence, they worked together as one to achieve the ultimate goal, of building a fence across the entrance to the woods.The mushys had one more wire and straw thread to go, as all the mushys rushed all the apricots to the forest, Master Mush called ,”All the strong mushys pull the ropes!” and suddenly the gate rolled up like a garage door closing and all the mushys and apricots were safe and sound in the forest. Master Mush yelled to all , “Thank you fellow mushys for all your support! We have now finished and achieved our goal, we have saved all the apricots.” Suddenly a young mushy said that there is no longer light, then April butted in saying, “Yes there is!” and pulled a lever and the bushes opened up a hole in the top of all the plants and trees.

Everybody cheered aloud and said three cheers for April, they all yelled ,”Hip hip hooray! hip hip hooray!” April was crowned the most cheerful apricot all round. This was the new beginning for all the mushys and apricots and everybody continued in their brilliant life.   

THE END

One thought on “My story

  1. This is a fabulous narrative Amelia.
    Thank you for sharing it on your blog.
    Please remember to edit your work carefully. It will make it easier for your readers to follow the story.
    Well done!
    Mrs Gridley 🙂

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